The way that The Albion worded the criteria for purchasing tickets/identity etc was worded in a very heavy handed way.
Palace's is a lot less threatening, yet basically says much the same.
They of course had the advantage of wording theirs after the reaction, by both sets of fans, had been gauged.
I presume ours was written by Barber? He does tend to use a confrontational/patronising tone when he writes.