Forget Parkour - yesterday I did a video on POLE DANCING

[bright1064]

agreed!


what is it these days with cameramen wobbling the cameras and panning in and out...they do it on Nigella and you end up getting seasick!!!

That's just the illusion.

In actual fact it's Nigella's curvy body wobbling all over the place.

Bit like a plate of jelly...but with bigger knockers!

 

[Biscuit]

im going to make some constructive criticisms of the video feature....as i like being a bit of a bastard.

1-the first shot is a tad WOBBLY...and the pan to the sign is painfully slow.

2- the interview subject(louise i think was her name) is standing in the right place but should be answering questions to a interviewer on the right. this allows for the contextual background(the sign) but also means the is in theory talking into the space infront of her..



that is all

Thought I'd add my two pence worth..

Wobbly first shot isn't the biggest problem with it. The head room is well off, it needs to be alot tighter.

The interview with Louise. Yeah, as point out by Mejona, the talking space is all wrong, try stand the other side of the camera so that she speaks into the space.. just a bit of grammer there.

The dancing to Poisen. The music could have been put on in the edit rather than recorded as live, it would have been lessy tinny and just been a lot more viewer friendly. Also a bit less fo this dancing, from one static shot - maybe throw in a few close ups and what have you to keep it a bit faster paced.

The interview with Amber - an ECM clip mic could have been used her to improve the sound quality the light pics out the wrong side of her face and the shot isnt tight enough. Good background tho, that worked well.

When throwing in an Aston or graphic, a fade in and out would be a bit easier on the eye than a straight cut.

The interview with Heidi is much better than the others and she seems to have more to say which is good. Maybe frame her alttle bit more to the side, shes a bit to central but other than that a good shot.

If you started on a piece to camera, it would have been quite nice to end this way! Made it a bit more fun and up tempo.

Good job tho.

 

[Del Boy]

At least the Danny Dyer impression has gone for this vid!

 

[Brighton Breezy]

Thanks for the tips everyone.

Filming and editing is fairly new to us so we are sort of picking it up as we go along.

The tips are very welcome!