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New Song (needs work)



Jerry Milton

New member
Aug 10, 2016
13
Hi guys! Me and my friend Carl have been working on a new song and wanted to get your feedback! Here goes!

To the tune of Cecilia by Simon and Garfunkle!

ROSENIOR - your breaking my heart
your breaking down the right wing - daily
oh rosenior, I'm down on my knees
I'm begging you please to come home

Watching games in the afternoon with Rosenior
Up in my bedroom (watching games)
I got up to clean my face
When I get back to my seat Bruno's taken your place!


So what you all think? We are trying to come up with some decent lyrics for the rasta bit but the stuff Carl is coming up with is pretty offensive. So I was hoping there might be an aspiring lyricist out there who could help us out a bit!?
 






Jerry Milton

New member
Aug 10, 2016
13
We are also going to try and start a Kayal song to the tune of Leader of the Gang by Gary Glitter that goes;

BERAM BERAM, BERAM BERAM, BERAM BERAM - KAYAL!

Any feedback greatly appreciated.
 








Foul Play Rocks

Well-known member
Feb 23, 2013
5,178
Hi guys! Me and my friend Carl have been working on a new song and wanted to get your feedback! Here goes!

To the tune of Cecilia by Simon and Garfunkle!

ROSENIOR - your breaking my heart
your breaking down the right wing - daily
oh rosenior, I'm down on my knees
I'm begging you please to come home

Watching games in the afternoon with Rosenior
Up in my bedroom (watching games)
I got up to clean my face
When I get back to my seat Bruno's taken your place!


So what you all think? We are trying to come up with some decent lyrics for the rasta bit but the stuff Carl is coming up with is pretty offensive. So I was hoping there might be an aspiring lyricist out there who could help us out a bit!?

I'm interested in what offensive Carl has to say. Can you just put some **** in the rude, sweary bits ?
 










Garry Nelson's Left Foot

Well-known member
Jul 7, 2003
13,054
tokyo
Hi guys! Me and my friend Carl have been working on a new song and wanted to get your feedback! Here goes!

To the tune of Cecilia by Simon and Garfunkle!

ROSENIOR - your breaking my heart
your breaking down the right wing - daily
oh rosenior, I'm down on my knees
I'm begging you please to come home

Watching games in the afternoon with Rosenior
Up in my bedroom (watching games)
I got up to clean my face
When I get back to my seat Bruno's taken your place!


So what you all think? We are trying to come up with some decent lyrics for the rasta bit but the stuff Carl is coming up with is pretty offensive. So I was hoping there might be an aspiring lyricist out there who could help us out a bit!?

Good, but this one's better:

 




Nixonator

Well-known member
Feb 8, 2016
6,733
Shoreham Beach
Hi guys! Me and my friend Carl have been working on a new song and wanted to get your feedback! Here goes!

To the tune of Cecilia by Simon and Garfunkle!

ROSENIOR - your breaking my heart
your breaking down the right wing - daily
oh rosenior, I'm down on my knees
I'm begging you please to come home

Watching games in the afternoon with Rosenior
Up in my bedroom (watching games)
I got up to clean my face
When I get back to my seat Bruno's taken your place!


So what you all think? We are trying to come up with some decent lyrics for the rasta bit but the stuff Carl is coming up with is pretty offensive. So I was hoping there might be an aspiring lyricist out there who could help us out a bit!?

Hi Jerry,

Please give my compliments to Carl for a song well made.

We'll definitely give this one a crack, might have to bring in a few of my Arsenal mates to get it started though.
 


WATFORD zero

Well-known member
NSC Patreon
Jul 10, 2003
25,654
I think we may finally have a songwriter to challenge The GIF dude's genius :lolol:

The Gary Glitter chant :bowdown::bowdown::bowdown:
 






Jerry Milton

New member
Aug 10, 2016
13
Lunchtime we came up with this effort. Any suggestions or amendments are very welcome - please don't be shy!!

To the tune of Mama Mia;

Tomer Hemed, here we go again
Murray, what a flipping strike force!
Tomer Hemed, scores a goal again?
Murray, just how much we've missed you!
 


Jim Van Winkle

Well-known member
Jul 14, 2010
3,125
Hawaii
These songs are golden. I REALLY REALLY want to read more of your fantastic lyrics.

You and Carl are to football chants what Lennon and McCartney are to the music world.

Please do not give up, make sure all new chants are posted on this thread.
 




Dick Swiveller

Well-known member
Sep 9, 2011
9,142
No 'chase a cockney up a tree'. And for that reason, I'm oooot.

Sent from my Nexus 7 using Tapatalk
 



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