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[Albion] "Why did you let it bounce?"
1442595774903328777- hans kraay fan club
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[Albion] "Why did you let it bounce?"
I'm with you. The whole second verse scans fine. I do think you need to lose a syllable (just delete 'Then') from this line though: "Then he gives the ball straight back again"- hans kraay fan club
- Post #88
- Forum: The Big Board