I wasn't actually trying to be snidey. I was just offering up corrections as a free of charge proofreader.
I think the write up is very good. Just a couple of simple mistakes that slipped under the radar which I'm flagging up for the sake of having them corrected.
I mean no malice!
Should be WERE also discussions...
I think you mean HELD
Apart from this, very good.
I do like our Tony. He manages to say all the right things to keep me reassured and confident