Plenty of highly talented graphic designers on here who I'm sure could assist you in coming up with the killer cover with a fresh pair of third-party eyes. For starters, I'm sure The Albion Roar could point you in the right direction...
I prefer the first one, but maybe drop the words 'SEATTLE CALL GIRL'? Just too much information there. Also, not sure how you'd do it, but could the woodenness of the cage somehow be played down (or the chain played up?) The cage in the first one especially looks like it could be kicked down...