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  1. Goldstone Rapper

    Sussex By The Sea

    Sorry, it was the 'take the time from me' lyric I didn't quite understand.
  2. Goldstone Rapper

    Sussex By The Sea

    Good work! I'm not sure about the third from last line, but the rest reads well, I think. If you, or anyone else, could have a stab at rewording the other lyrics, so they capture the struggles of the 1990s, the fight for a new stadium, reaching the top flight in 1979 and the FA Cup Final in...
  3. Goldstone Rapper

    Sussex By The Sea

    What you say still doesn't undermine the point that the language of the 1910s sounds quite dated now.
  4. Goldstone Rapper

    Sussex By The Sea

    Nice re-write. :thumbsup: But it's still too male-centric, and you haven't done anything with the merry bugles reference. The military and farming themes could also do with a re-write. I would love to hear what a fully updated version of the lyrics, that truly embody these times in an...
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