Good work! I'm not sure about the third from last line, but the rest reads well, I think.
If you, or anyone else, could have a stab at rewording the other lyrics, so they capture the struggles of the 1990s, the fight for a new stadium, reaching the top flight in 1979 and the FA Cup Final in...
Nice re-write. :thumbsup:
But it's still too male-centric, and you haven't done anything with the merry bugles reference.
The military and farming themes could also do with a re-write. I would love to hear what a fully updated version of the lyrics, that truly embody these times in an...