I know where you're coming from, but I'm not sure it scans. And pauses don't work in chants.
Let me suggest another.
He's in love with Brighton Woah
He's in love with Brighton Woah
He's in love with Brighton Woah
Lamptey don't like Palace, No
That is entirely sufficient. If you want to...
In view of the above:
Tariq, Tariq, Tariq
Also known as
Lamptey, Lamptey, Lamptey
That's the way we like it, like it, like it
And, if not, then lump it, lump it, lump it
oh-oh oh-oh-oh, oh-oh oh-oh-oh,
(rinse and repeat)
The golden rule of football chants: take a tune sung before (preferably by another club, ideally Palace) and change the words.
Never ever try anything new, unless you're ManUre, and the original tune was by Joy Division.
Otherwise, nothing from later than 1965, and nothing original.
And...